Zach, I like where you are looking to capture dynamic poses. Keep this up. Overall the forms are decent but they're really overworked and mannered. The gestures aren't bad - but the repetitive buildup of lines around the limbs, back and face just slow the drawing down and don't add to the sense of gesture or weight shift. When we are working in pencil, try to lighten up a bit.
Zach,
ReplyDeleteI like where you are looking to capture dynamic poses. Keep this up. Overall the forms are decent but they're really overworked and mannered. The gestures aren't bad - but the repetitive buildup of lines around the limbs, back and face just slow the drawing down and don't add to the sense of gesture or weight shift. When we are working in pencil, try to lighten up a bit.