Zach, Overall, the camera shots here are what create interesting poses. While the top 2 pages have some interesting shots, overall, the choices could have been more dynamic. Proportions are an issue with these drawings - mostly because I think you're trying to be too descriptive about the subject and not looking enough at the pose. Make these performers into caricatures. And yes - as I keep hammering home - loosen the line up.
Zach,
ReplyDeleteOverall, the camera shots here are what create interesting poses. While the top 2 pages have some interesting shots, overall, the choices could have been more dynamic.
Proportions are an issue with these drawings - mostly because I think you're trying to be too descriptive about the subject and not looking enough at the pose. Make these performers into caricatures.
And yes - as I keep hammering home - loosen the line up.