Zach, The last two pages have decent poses and good individuality. Try beginning lighter, then committing to a line that defines an arm, leg, back, etc. - these tend to get overworked. I find myself looking at several lines, asking "which one is the contour ?" Working lightly, then committing to a darker line (and leaving them alone or going directly over the line) will creat more convincing forms.
Zach,
ReplyDeleteThe last two pages have decent poses and good individuality. Try beginning lighter, then committing to a line that defines an arm, leg, back, etc. - these tend to get overworked. I find myself looking at several lines, asking "which one is the contour ?" Working lightly, then committing to a darker line (and leaving them alone or going directly over the line) will creat more convincing forms.