Zach, Again, the proportions are decent but you're losing the overall gesture of the figure. Don't get too hung up on proportions early on - just some simple indications, then move on. The first page is your strongest one. The gestures have a dynamic silhouette and good pose. Remember the hands and feet - they become the finishing touch on each limb that can really add to the character... faces, too.
Zach,
ReplyDeleteAgain, the proportions are decent but you're losing the overall gesture of the figure. Don't get too hung up on proportions early on - just some simple indications, then move on. The first page is your strongest one. The gestures have a dynamic silhouette and good pose. Remember the hands and feet - they become the finishing touch on each limb that can really add to the character... faces, too.