Zach, I think you are looking to capture a variety of poses and turning the form well into a 3/4 pose but I think these all get too overwrought. You have to be sensitive and light in your approach. I can see you want the proportions to be just right - and your sense of proportion is good - but it makes for a stiff gesture. Sometimes, a couple references for proportion and you're off - if the legs, arms and torso are elongated, so be it. Also, with all the line weight you've placed in these, why no faces ? Don't neglect them after pouring effort into the figure.
Zach,
ReplyDeleteI think you are looking to capture a variety of poses and turning the form well into a 3/4 pose but I think these all get too overwrought. You have to be sensitive and light in your approach. I can see you want the proportions to be just right - and your sense of proportion is good - but it makes for a stiff gesture. Sometimes, a couple references for proportion and you're off - if the legs, arms and torso are elongated, so be it.
Also, with all the line weight you've placed in these, why no faces ? Don't neglect them after pouring effort into the figure.