Good overall gesture, nice use of props, but I think that your figures need a little more definition, they're very blocky/somewhat stiff, maybe if you put a few more lines into the clothing or add some more details.
Zach, The 1st and 3rd pages have the strongest sense of gesture, while having some individuality. Yes, I agree that you're wrestling with the form and it can get a little blocky - but I would rather you give the head and face a consistent level of definition with the clothing and details around them. Don't shy away from basically indicating hair and face - even expression - after defining all that other information.
Good overall gesture, nice use of props, but I think that your figures need a little more definition, they're very blocky/somewhat stiff, maybe if you put a few more lines into the clothing or add some more details.
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ReplyDeleteThe 1st and 3rd pages have the strongest sense of gesture, while having some individuality. Yes, I agree that you're wrestling with the form and it can get a little blocky - but I would rather you give the head and face a consistent level of definition with the clothing and details around them. Don't shy away from basically indicating hair and face - even expression - after defining all that other information.