Zach, The are a few issues with your work on which we need to focus: * Most importantly, your line weight is too unsure. When I talk about loose lines in my postings, I mean a long, loose line that is put down with confidence and a sense that you will buidl into this line. You lines tend to be short and tentative looking. * While the proportions are not off, they seem a little inconsistent from drawing to drawing. * Because you work with short lines, you overlap those lines in areas of detail, causing extremities and faces to be darker in their line weight. See if you can arrive at a more solid form faster, without laying in so many lines.
Try to show me more work that is faster in it's pacing (30 seconds to make an entire gesture, for instance)
Zach,
ReplyDeleteThe are a few issues with your work on which we need to focus:
* Most importantly, your line weight is too unsure. When I talk about loose lines in my postings, I mean a long, loose line that is put down with confidence and a sense that you will buidl into this line. You lines tend to be short and tentative looking.
* While the proportions are not off, they seem a little inconsistent from drawing to drawing.
* Because you work with short lines, you overlap those lines in areas of detail, causing extremities and faces to be darker in their line weight. See if you can arrive at a more solid form faster, without laying in so many lines.
Try to show me more work that is faster in it's pacing (30 seconds to make an entire gesture, for instance)