Zach, You've got good variety in your points of view and in the birds themselves but your line is way too careful. Think of the essence of a bird - it's flowing lines while in flight - and lay those lines down loosely and freely. These are too focused on details. If i see light, loose construction lines, it's good - these shouldn't look finished. Keep drawing !
Zach,
ReplyDeleteYou've got good variety in your points of view and in the birds themselves but your line is way too careful. Think of the essence of a bird - it's flowing lines while in flight - and lay those lines down loosely and freely. These are too focused on details. If i see light, loose construction lines, it's good - these shouldn't look finished.
Keep drawing !